ENG 121 Week 4 DQ 2 Revision Sample
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Revision Sample. Review Chapter 9 of Essentials of College Writing. Then, review the “Revision Checklist”(available in the online course), which will guide you through the process of reflecting and revising your personal essay. After revising your personal essay based on the checklist, post at least two pages of your revision and the checklist to the discussion board. Then, add a paragraph where you state the following:
1. The part of your essay you have decided to revise
2. How you revised it
3. What techniques or methods from the required resources in this course you used to revise your essay
Respond to at least two of your classmates. Respond to one classmate who used a different revision technique and one who used a similar revision technique. For each response:
a. Compare the resources and techniques you used for revision to those your classmate used.
b. Make one concrete suggestion about how the revision sample can be further improved. Please do not comment on grammar or stylistics—just content.
Response posts must be 125 to 200 words in length and posted by Day 7. If you have questions about how to participate in discussions, consult “About Discussions” under the Course Home menu. You are not required to support your claims with additional scholarly materials; however, should you decide to use additional resources, make sure you properly cite any references. Refer to the Ashford Writing Center’sCitation and Reference Guide for guidelines on citing sources in APA style.