Hannah McMahan
Mr.Mahoney
English 12
8/22/13
Misunderstood Fame
Beyoncé has huge hits even though she’s not a good performer. A prime example is her Superbowl performance it was awful. Also she can’t sing or dance the basics you should be able to do if you’re a pop star.
Beyoncé’s Superbowl performance was horrendous. During her performance she didn’t sing the entire time. She lip sung the whole time, she would say “oh” or “hey” but that’s as much singing as it got. The outfit she wore made her look like a striper. It looked like she barely had close on. It was nasty and inappropriate for young children at home or at the game that saw her. While she was performing the crowd was dull. There were a few times when the crowd went crazy but she had a hard time keeping the hype up.
Beyoncé’s voice is fake. With all the new editing systems we have now they are able to make her sound good. They use the new systems to remake and tweak what’s wrong with her voice. She is fairly pitchy. Her songs all have a high part that is just awful. Also when she sings her voice starts to crack. I would think someone as famous as her would not need editing. Also I would think she wouldn’t be pitchy or crackly.
Someone as famous as her you would think they could do everything but not Beyoncé she can’t dance either. When she dances her background dancers are on different moves then she is. Did they do it on purpose? I think not. She looks at what the other dancers are doing and then she does it. Which makes it look like she doesn’t know what to do. Also during her performances she whips her hair. You can only do that so much. It isn’t even a dance move. It would seem that her hurt would hurt from how much she whips her hair.
People think Beyoncé is so pretty and a role model but, who wants a fake role model? She fake sings in her performances. The ones she actually does sing in are awful. I wouldn’t want my daughter to look up to someone who fakes for fame.
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