Welcome to WritePoint, the automated review system that recognizes errors most commonly made by university students in academic essays. The system embeds comments into your [Word choice—using the second-person pronoun "you" is inappropriate in academic writing. Except within a direct quote, rewrite with third-person pronouns (he, she, it, they).] paper and suggests possible changes in grammar and style. Please evaluate each comment carefully to ensure that the suggested change is appropriate for your [Word choice—using the second-person pronoun "you" is inappropriate in academic writing. Except within a direct quote, rewrite with third-person pronouns (he, she, it, they).] paper, but remember that your instructor's preferences for style and format prevail. You will also need to review your own citations and references since WritePoint capability in this area is limited. Please see the other helpful writing resources in the Tutorials and Guides section of the Center for Writing Excellence. Thank you for using WritePoint. Art Form Comparison – River dance vs. 16 Century Dance Brenda Evans, Orlando Prado, Chantha Ros, Felix Ruiz, and Madelyn Zeiss University of Phoenix Hum 266 / TAUC06 Bud Hollowell, Ph.D. February 25, 2009 Introduction Art Form Comparison – River dance vs. 16 Century Dance _ Beginnings _ Michael was born in 1958, to Irish parents who emigrated from Ireland in 1947, and settled in Chicago, Illinois (n.d., Part 1, para. 2). He often visited family in Ireland where his Grandmother Hannah taught him his first steps at the age of 4. At the age of 11, Michael’s mother enrolled him in Irish dance classes, and at age 17 he brought home to the U.S., for the first time, the All World Irish Dancing Champion, and All Ireland Flute Champion (n.d., Part 1, para. 4). Once out of high school, Michael opened an Irish dance studio, where 300 people waited in line to enroll. As he became better known, he was asked to tour with the Chieftains’, a...