Task 1
First of all, I agree the teacher should correctly mark the students mistakes and correct them but if that is all, I don’t think the teacher is giving all his effort. Teacher should indeed make comments and criticisms to the student about his or her work. The comments are important in my opinion because it shows that you understand the each individual student and you are showing insight on his or her work. The students will read the comments and try to work in a way the teacher wants him or her to. Comments should be made when it can benefit the student in any way.
Task 2
STUDENT 1
I am 46 years old and married for twenty years. We have three children,
one son and two daughters. They are six, eight, and eleven years old. I am
an electrical engineer and I work for a company that manufactures machines for processing automatically.
At first, I am going to learn English in Great Britain. It's very important for my
job. Then, I would like to have a little company with about ten co-workers for
myself. If it isn't possible, I'll manage a department who can develop high
technology machines.
I became???(don’t understand what you are trying to say) the test sheets for completion and return directly to you. You phoned me at your agency about my course at your school in Bristol. Thank you very much for your
trouble. I'm happy to come to your school and I'm sure I can learn better English.
I don't know my flight number on March 5th. I will let you know as soon as
possible.
STUDENT 2
I'm forty years old. My height is 1.8m and my hair is blond. My hobbies are
walking and climbing the mountain. My job is Quality-Manager. I lived ten
years in Russia. I wake up at seven o'clock in the morning. I go for
breakfast in the kitchen. After breakfast, I drive to work by car. In the
office, there is a lot of work. I have a break at ten o'clock and I drink a tea.
I go home for lunch at 12 o’clock.
In the future I will have a good life with my family. I...