The Main Point of This Paper

The Main Point of This Paper

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Appendix G

Peer Review Checklist*

What is the main point of this paper? | Different types of the wars we hae had in our past |
What is the greatest strength of this paper? | The author shows a lot of interest in the wars |
What material does not seem to fit the main point of the paper or does not seem to be appropriate for the audience? | The information does fit the main point o the essay |
Has the author sufficiently addressed counterarguments? Explain your answer. | The author did not show enough information of counter arguments, he showed a lot of statistics, which is a lot I didn’t know, but it could show more counter arguments |
Where should the author add more details or examples? Explain your answer. | It could have used more information where the pictures were, explained them better |
Where is the writing unclear or vague? | The author could have used more information on why we had these wars and what extent of the consequences it did to our country |
What is your favorite part of this piece of writing? | I enjoyed learning and seeing the facts about the wars. |
What other comments can you provide for the author? | I enjoyed the essay, it was well written and flowed from each war to the next one. Give more information on why we had the wars and what it did to our contry or other countries involved |

*Adapted from Reinking, J. A., Hart, A. W., & Von der Osten, R. (2003). Strategies for successful writing: A rhetoric, research guide, reader, and handbook (6th ed.). Boston: Prentice-Hall/Pearson Custom Publishing.

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