a. Hook: have you ever really wanted to do something but scared of being challenged ?
b. Thesis: one of the most important things that people should have in their lives is a dream. As a young man, i have experienced not too many things but there is one of my childhood taught me a valuable lesson. That showed me as long as i keep trying, never give up, success will comes.
2.Body: one of the most important things that people should have in their lives is a dream
a. Dream are goals that people try to make it come true
b. Each of us might have aims to live life getting a great job, travelling around the world or being a famous person ...
c. However, There are also a lot of difficults you have to face to reach the objectives. We probably pay for that, for example, to have a great job you need to spend time studying, collecting experiences...
3.Body: The story of my life that taught me a valuable lesson
a. I was a kid and my dream was about being accepted by the toppest high schood. i failed on the first time. I was totally down and wasted my time playing computer games and hanging out with friends
b. The currently school decided to fluck me out again, family dissapointed about me, mom was really upset. i regretted and promised myself not to make people around me sad again.
c. I started over, and everything got better. Finally, i was accepted to back to school and become one of the best students on the next quarter. After that, i got for my own a lesson that is about never give up
4.body: success will come only when we try and never stop following our dreams
a. We should take care of our dreams by building a strong determination from deep insight
b. On the way to success, we surely fall at least one time, but everytime we fall, we learn a new thing to avoid being fallen for the next time.
c. Failure is not always bad, the lessons we learn from failure could be a key that lead you to success
a. Dreaming is the...