The Day I Broke My Arm
Lorie Benincasa
English 111
9/18/2014
Descriptive Narritive
Benincasa ii
Outline
Thesis: That day ribing my pony changd my whole summer.
I. I couldn’t wait to be the next barrel racing champoin.
A) would feel like a star
B) would get a trophy
C) get to sleep in the barn
D) eat from the chow tent
II. Impatiently waiting for Saturday to come
A) day dream of winning
B) Imagined every step my pony took
C) drew diagrams of barrels in the dirt
III. Father gives advice
A) very supportive
1. kind
2. Good looking cowboy
IV. Practice all I could
A) tried to get faster
1. Cutting corners tighter
B) wind blowing in my face
1. Dirt fliny through air
V. Night before big event
A) father puts me to bed
B) gives me advice
1. You can win
VI. Day of event
A) load trailer
B) drive to event
1, seems forever to get there
VII. Arrive at event
A) get signed in
1. Get number
2. Get stall
B) unlead trailer
C) practice...