Alex Fajardo
Narrative/ Descriptive
11\10\11
The Perfect Proposal
As I woke up that morning to open my eyes, I see my hearts desire, my forever happy ending, my “Aphrodite” The goddess of beauty and love. I lean over to give her a soft kiss upon her forehead thinking of what my day would be like. I pondered at that moment saying “I hope she loves this ring that symbolizes my heart and soul plus I hope I don’t choke on my words” , as I try to propose for the first and last time in my life. The plan is that we go to Disneyland, have an unforgettable day and when the sun goes down ill find the strength to say four unremarkable words that iv been rehearsing repeatedly nonstop for months nervously in front of my friends, family and a mirror. As we got ready putting in are belongings in the car we drove off to enjoy our day at Disneyland, but little did I know a few hectic events would unfold.
We arrived to Disneyland with excitement and trill in are eyes ready to just see where the park takes us in its wonderland, because neither of us have been to Disneyland in years. Having are year passes we go strate in the park, no waiting and no lines we begin running in like five year old kids to every ride and everywhere we went. First Indiana Jones with a huge rock about to smash you to the Tikki room full of funny colorful birds singing to you. Walking looking up at the Tarzan Tree House we pass it to walk toward “Pirates of the Caribbean ride” which is one of are favorite rides together. We yell, “ahhh” and the song plays in the back ground “Yo ho yo its a pirates life for me”. As we get off the ride I go to the restroom, standing in front of the sink washing my hands I hear behind me two males fighting and saying “ whats up that's my girl” as he say's that one of the men pushes the other hitting me on my back and slamming my shoulder into the mirror. The two guy's suddenly stop and turn to me and say “hey man, are you ok? I'm really sorry about that” I respond “...