Hi, please have a look at my essay on describing a friend and give me some feedback!thanks!
I think that i am very lucky because i have a lot of friends. Among my best friends is Mai. She is 16 years old. we live in the same village . She is my neighbor and we are now classmates, so we have been friends...
MOM AND THE BEACH AND ME
My mother suddenly got the strange idea that it
would be a good day to go to the beach. My father
had a golfing date with his buddies, and my sister
had plans to run off with her boyfriend somewhere
for the day. I kind of felt sorry for my mother.
She had thought...
mom that becomes obsessed with curiosity and her son |
This one’s a little lengthy. A lot of background, lead-up, and “Explaining”, as most of my 1st chapters seem to be. I feel it’s kind of important to know what the characters are thinking, where they're goming from. For those of you that just...
The most challenging time in my life
Two years ago I went in for a regular dental cleaning and discovered that I had a huge mouth issue that would require a big surgery, and probably change my life in a very dramatic way. My two canine teeth were stuck in my pallet, and instead of them coming down...
Does Big Red really get you closer?
As a kid I always saw and loved the Big Red chewing gum commercials. I felt that the beat was catchy and my dad was a religious Big Red chewer at the time. The other day years later I saw some Big Red at my local Wal- Mart and thought “Hmmmmm does Big Red chewing...
AUTOBIOGRAPHY OF A POOR STUDENT
Who I am : I saw the light on this earth on --- then my name was given ----- and my father gave my name ---------- it was a village in the district of 24pgs, far away from Kolkata, a full green rustic smell can be smelt there even now this has become a model village...
Food! Oh my god I love food, and you can kind of tell. There so many different kinds. I enjoy the great satisfaction when I’m full. The only thing I don’t really like about food is seeing it in people’s mouths or hearing them chewing on their food. This is probably one of the things that irks me the most...
he caught a glimpse of what looked like a mountain in a uniform approaching him, a tough-looking Italian cop, wearing mirror shades and carrying a big old nightstick. All the cops in town were Italian, thanks to Mafia connections and departmental politics, and they were also known for being mean sons-of-bitches...
that everything around me was quiet. There wasn’t a single sound, and then I heard a rustle coming from the corner of the room. Then I saw dim candle lights starting to appear. I was shocked. Then, all of a sudden the lights were switched on. Many people were in the room, including my family and friends...
Growing up I was always one of the smartest people in my class and it seemed as though everyone looked up to me for that. But with me being the naïve person I once was, I failed to see that people only looked to me for answers, rather than for the role model figure I deeply thought I was. I was good...
to move at all, but in my vision it was far too long. Blasting through light speed screaming for my life, as my body is being slowly put together in the future.
I open my eyes; I’m standing in the middle of a road with many people staring at me in amazement. I open my mouth, but the words won’t come...
nights, that my little baby boy turned into a little man. Was it one precise activity or numerous ones that turned a baby into a little man? It took three signs to make me aware that my baby boy was a little man and those signs were; letting go of my hand to walk on his own, pushing away of my fingers to...
sad and needs to cry. Maybe she’s feeling three.
Because the way you grow old is kind of like an onion or like the rings inside a tree trunk or like my little wooden dolls that fit one inside the other, each year inside the next one. That’s how being eleven years old is.
You don’t feel eleven. Not...
your life´ they said to me. Photos of someone opening your mouth and putting something inside my mouth gave me jumps of anxiety. All that tools around the dental office, the shiny knives, the immaculate white room and the image of the doctor’s perfect teeth, all that made my heart rate increased and...
already out shining like never before. It shined so bright that I could feel my forehead burning from its rays. The sound of the singing birds flowing through my ears was beautiful. I was on my way to school when I encountered my best friend on the road. We walked together to school and I went to the principal’s...
An Encounter with a Machine
My first thought upon seeing that enormous, ugly, dirty, yellow thing was never to get at least a mile close to it. I had heard of how loud a lion roared, but I had never in my entire life imagined anything could sound ten times a loud and as scary as that. I was just five...
I’m still hoping that what just happened was a very, very, awfully vivid dream.
There I was, minding my own business. I was just simply sitting in the park, enjoying the fresh day given to us. Then all of a sudden, here comes Rico Suave. He struts over effortlessly in my direction,...
have the most long lasting flavor???
Hypothesis: I think stride will last the longest
Steps: 1) Buy 4 kinds of gum 2) go home 3) put gum in my mouth 4) Start timer 5) put down how long the flavor lasted
• Background info.
Roger=R, Linda=L, Mark=M, Sue= S
R- Hi there thank you all for coming in, my name is Roger ans I'm going to be running today's focus group.
L- Alright, Whoooo!, Roger, roger, roger( clapping)
R- Ohh, ha-ha ha- thank you- the products were going to be testing today is a new line of dressing of Hidden...
Into the Unknown By Priyanka Dutt
This day was the most traumatic of my life. I felt an awful aching hollowness within myself, and the world around me. I decided to desert my bleak home and go on a long, aimless walk with my thoughts. As I approached Mrs M small townhouse I began to see a row of vertical...
months and talking at thirteen month. My first word was mama. I know that had to suck for anybody that had to watch me because I like to talk. I didn’t really have a lot of birthday parties. We did most of my birthdays with just my family at my Grandma’s big Blue house. My first birthday party that I remember...
perfect – neither am I”
I wake up. My eyes strive to get up, and a little light comes through the window and hit my face. I crawl under the duvet, but understand that I have to get up. I have to go to school.
My feet hit the ground, I run. Blueberry shrubs strike my legs. It is cold. All I can see is...
"Why do you do that?"
The question shattered my daydream into pieces so small that I couldn't remember what I was thinking of. "
huh?" was my reply. For a few seconds I was confused about my location.
"Why do you do that?" he asked again.
I finally found the source of the question and everything came...
different kind of channels available to promote their product and expand the awareness. The main three factors discussed in the article are: Word of mouth, in store experience and initial brand consideration.
But, there are other factors that also can play a major role in the growth of a product in...
school, my grandma greets me at the back door with a big warm hug and a smile. “Hey, Snuggle. How was school today?”
And me, being my, at times, emotionless-self, says with a vague shrug, “Fine.” And just as I’m about to walk into the computer room, the most amazing, drool-inducing smell smacks me in the...
"Why are you looking at me like that? What's wrong?" she asked, almost playfully.
He didn't respond and remained fixed there, his jaw slack and his mouth slightly open. She reached down and drew his small face into her hands. He could smell the nicotine on her fingers as she tilted...
|Give me a minute to finish my work and then I'll |
| | |be all ears to hear about your project. |
|break a leg |good-luck |Today's the big game, eh? Break...
Ursula Riggs’ Coming of Age
Big Mouth and Ugly Girl by Joyce Carol Oates is about two teenagers who come of age or grow-up over the course of the novel. One of the main characters in the novel is Ursula Rigs, the “Ugly Girl” of the novel’s title. Ursula encounters many hardships over the course of...
In Just One Day:
There I was sitting at my desk, while the vivid sun was shining in my eyes on that hot summer day. I was trying to pay attention to Mr. Colin’s monotonous history lecture. I was wondering to myself why I woke up that morning in a pool of sweat and feeling like I was on fire. I felt...
Dreams Come True
My dream is to live in a log cabin with a stretch of property a mile long surrounded by a massive garden full of flowers and trees. Living in the city with all the busy cars and rushing loud mouth people would not fit in the category for my dream home. It should be located...